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Renga: Carbon

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your carbon words
fall and catch—
my lungs burn
:iconthe-haiku-club:'s March Renga

Seed '01': [link]
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2: [link]
3: [link]

4: Certain words, when spoken aloud, leave a trace.
Since this started with an English haiku/senryu seed, I think the above form suits.

5: Up to you. Please consider replying. Thank you.
5a: [link]
5b: [link]
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somnomollior's avatar
I must think of some more elements now! We could do the whole periodic table!